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英語で論文やエッセイなど英文を書かなければならない研究者、留学生などの方向けに役立つ情報を紹介しています
英文エッセイの添削依頼を添削サイトでやってみる
前回の記事で紹介した、英文添削サイト"Grammarly"を実際に使ってみます。

Grammarlyは下のリンクからいけます。興味のある方は"Try Grammarly Today!"をクリックしてみてください。
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添削対象とした英文は下の英文です。アメリカの大学に留学している1年生だという方の英文エッセイの下書きだそうです。Yahoo!知恵袋の質問から拝借しました。

ちょっと長いですが、英文添削サイトGrammarlyは、短すぎる文章はチェックしてくれません。


Reading is my hobby as long as I can remember. When I think that who make my hobby as reading, my grandmother is the answer.
I was living with my grand parents when I was little because my parents were really busy at their works. My grandmother loved books. She had hundreds books in her house. She especially loved literary writings but she also have many picture books and comics. My mother who loved books as much as my grandmother grew up with those children books. And I, too, grew up with them and also became a lover of books.
I always took out one of those books from grandmother's bookshelf. The run to grandmother and ask her to read the books for me. I had some favorite books which I always ask my grandmother to read to me again and again. Even I couldn't remember how many times I had read those books.
My grandmother read book for me all the time, so I have never tried to read by myself. And one day, I remember I was 4 years old, I ask my grandmother to read for me as always. But she said that she was busy, so she couldn't read book for me now. So I had to find the other fun thing to do. As I could think of nothing better to do, I decided to open my book. I don't remember the book's title, but I remember it was one of my favorite book. I have memorized all of the sentences in the book. So I started reading them aloud though I didn't look at those letters. It was a first time that I tried to reading book by myself.
I started reading book by myself. I always chosen books which I memorized from my grandmother's reading. But one time, I chosen a book which I have never read before. I opened that and looked at sentenced in the book. I realized that there were many words I have seen before in my favorite books. So I took my favorite books, put them beside the new book and started looking for same words in both new book and books I read many times. Used my favorite books as dictionaries, I did really reading for first time.


さて、Grammarlyの入力箇所にこの文章をコピーしてペーストし、"Check your text"ボタンをクリックします。

なお、Grammarlyは、ファイルのアップロードでも直接入力でも、コピー&ペーストでも対応します。コピー&ペーストの場合は、入力窓のpasteという箇所をクリックすると、入力を受け付けます。

チェック結果は次のようになりました。

grammarly成績表

総合スコアは56点。しっかりかけている英文だと思いましたが、なかなか評価は厳しいですね。

Plagialismは盗用、文章の剽窃という意味です。結果によるとこの方は著作権の侵害はしていません。という意味です。

スペルミスは1か所
文法(Grammar)を修正すべき個所は16か所
句読点(Punctuation)がおかしい箇所は3か所
文脈に適合したワーディングの修正点は4か所

という結果でした。

では、実際にどこをどう修正するのか?というのは登録すればわかるようになっている仕組みです。
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